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My Green Machine

By:M.G.



When they gave it to me I almost screamed! THANK YOU!!! I shouted.  ‘Go try it out.’ they said. I rode it all the way up the block and back again. That was awesome!!!! I’m going to say this one more time. THANK…YOU…FOR…MY…GREEN…MACHINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


What  a Green Machine basically is, is like a bike that is really low to the ground.It has two really fat wheels in the back,and one really skinny wheel in the front,with one pedal on each side.The seat adjustes so your legs can reach the pedals. There are also two levers.One that you pull to turn left, and one that you pull to turn right.




If you are going really fast, you can pull one lever and make a 180 degree spin. I would recommend this to people that weigh 180, and under. I give this five the highest number of stars possible.




Draft Day

 By: D.S.

Do you like football? If you do then go to on demand and search Draft Day. If it pops up click on it and buy it. It is an awesome movie but I think it is pg13 so watch out for a couple of bad words. The movie’s about teams looking for good players in the Draft. The main character in the movie is this guy who took a risk and took a Middle Linebacker number 1 overall in the Draft. If you want to find out what happens next then go watch it right now. I like this movie because it’s exciting and a good movie. I’d recommend people who like football to watch this. I’d also rate this movie 5 out of 5 stars.




Matilda
BY A.W.


If you like a story full of  interesting ,and suprising idas  Matilda is the book to read. Her parents are mean when she hardly does any thing ! Matilda wants to read books, but her dad  doesn’t want her to . So Matilda tries to fights back. The cover of Matilda looks pretty boring ,but once you start reading Matilda you just can’t stop! I recomend this book to any one who likes humor. I think this is a good book because it will cause you to be full of laghter and giggles!

READ MATILDA!

8 comments:

  1. These are great reviews thanks :]

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  2. I agree with Amanda when she said that Matilda is a great book. And I think the movie Draft Day does sound really good.

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  3. Anabella, I meant, not Amanda!

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  4. draft day sounds like a great movie you had a awesome review.

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  5. I liked how you said how the bike worked and how you rode it.

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  6. Draft day sounds great, and also I'm going to watch it this week.

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  7. Draft Day is a great movie that's why I wrote about it for writing.

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  8. I have never seen draft day but it sounds good.

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